We were learning how to make a persuasive piece of writing about is the environment our responsibility. I agreed that the environment is our responsibility because its where we live. The environment is our home. In my three paragraphs in included talking about rubbish, animals and trees.
I really enjoyed writing about this type of writing because you can persuade someone to something. I am persuading people to look after our environment. At the moment we are having lots of rubbish being just thrown on the floor and ending up in the oceans killing the sea life.
I found it hard to research and find the right information about the topic we are learning about. Next time I will make my paragraphs a bit longer and find more information about this cool topic.
Keep trying to make the world a better place for us and our animals!
Kia ora Isabella, I like the way you made your title a question. I also like the way you said that we are kaitiaki by being responsible for our environment. Next time I think you need to make sure your sentences make sense.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Mia,
DeleteThank you for your feedback I will definitely do that next time. \