Yesterday, in Washington Dc, at 12.30 pm. Agent Walter Beckett was walking to his favourite green seat. He placed his briefcase on the seat and took a big bite off his bagel. As he opened his briefcase there suddenly was a suspicious pigeon it didn’t look like a normal pigeon if you look right close to his eyes you can see the suspicion he had! It was looking right up at the bagel. He threw a bit of bagel to him but the pigeon didn’t want the piece of bagel, he wanted it all! Suddenly! The Pigeon started attacking Agent Walter. As the pigeon was attacking he threw the whole bagel trying to get the naughty pigeon off him. “Oh no!” He threw it at the briefcase And the briefcase suddenly closes and the pigeon was trapped in the briefcase. He curiously opened the glass case to release the red button which was for the rocket release. The the pigeon pressed the red button! The tower suddenly released the rocket. OH NO! Agent Walter grabbed the bagel off the ground and tried to get the pigeon out of his briefcase. The pigeon was scared to get it so he threw it and threw the pigeon out of the briefcase.
I enjoyed writing about this.
I found it changeling to remember all the information off the video.
We done this with Mr Barclay last week on Tuesday.
We write about this because we wanted to make a descriptive peace of writing.
We done this with Mr Barclay last week on Tuesday.
We write about this because we wanted to make a descriptive peace of writing.
Kia ora, Isabella I like how you writ a recount with a lot of detail. I think this is the best writing ive ever read. Keep up the great work! From Rautaki
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